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Quiver Red

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Hi, would you like to critique my poem?

When the sun sets
When silver orbs rise
When shining stars ponder
When the lone wolf cries

When winds come to cease
When leaves all but fall
When trees like to quiver
When branches brawl

When firelights flicker
When wooden logs burn
When smoky hands scale
When red embers spurn

When shallow greys linger
When silhouettes cast
When mid comes to night
When cold hours fast

When yellow approaches
When the moon finds home
When shining stars rest
When soul wolfs roam...

Night goes to sleep

This is an impressive poem! I really like your writing pattern, and your use of personification. It's really nice in word choice, rhythm and flow. For some reason, as I was first reading, I started to apply the poem to this tune to this one song I really like, that's slow and melodical. Of course I made some adjustments to the tune so it would fit the stanzas and overall poem, but I really liked it being read as a song as well. I like your writing, so you should keep doing it. Hope this helps!^-^

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Hi, would you like to critique my poem?

When the sun sets
When silver orbs rise
When shining stars ponder
When the lone wolf cries

When winds come to cease
When leaves all but fall
When trees like to quiver
When branches brawl

When firelights flicker
When wooden logs burn
When smoky hands scale
When red embers spurn

When shallow greys linger
When silhouettes cast
When mid comes to night
When cold hours fast

When yellow approaches
When the moon finds home
When shining stars rest
When soul wolfs roam...

Night goes to sleep

This is an impressive poem! I really like your writing pattern, and your use of personification. It's really nice in word choice, rhythm and flow. For some reason, as I was first reading, I started to apply the poem to this tune to this one song I really like, that's slow and melodical. Of course I made some adjustments to the tune so it would fit the stanzas and overall poem, but I really liked it being read as a song as well. I like your writing, so you should keep doing it. Hope this helps!^-^

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